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“This kaleidoscope is broken, all its colours have spilled out.”
“What are you doing?” The voice that asked this question was soft and young and held a rasping quality.
“Playing,” came the equally soft and young answer, though the voice was smoother, “want to play too?” The speaker looked up as he asked, brown eyes peeking up from behind pale bangs.
“No,” the reply was monotone, the blue eyes bored, and the pale face expressionless.
“Please,” the blond whined, lower lip jutting out, his hands reaching out to grasp his counterparts' wrist. “Just one game?” He asked, wheedling as he tugged on the boy's arm, trying to get him to sit.
“No Ilsi, I will not play with you,” the reply this time was more emphatic, but not cross. The blond wrinkled his nose, face upturned to look at the darker boy. His games forgotten, he quickly pulled himself into a kneeling position, his hands falling onto his knees. Seeing Ilsi's pleading expression, the other boy sighed, and dropped down, mirroring his position. “I'm not going to play with you,” he insisted, “but don't make faces they'll stick like that.”
Immediately Ilsi's upset visage smoothed out, leaving a blank, hollow look in it's place, trying to imitate his friend. They sat in silence for several moments, mirror images, and yet not. One boy was dark while the other was light. One boy exuded a cold dispassion, while the other radiated joy and childishness. They couldn't have been less alike. “Are you sure?” Ilsi asked finally, face splitting into a hopeful, docile grin.
Despite this, the boy's resolve didn't waver, “yep, I'm sure.”
Pouting once again, the blond huffed, “you're no fun Sïl, no fun at all.”
Sïl laughed softly, “I'm not suppose to be fun, remember?”
Ilsi shook his head, “remember what?” he demanded, brown eyes narrowed.
A sigh, “nothing Il', nothing at all,” Sïl looked up at the door, “I gotta go, okay, I'll see you tomorrow. And remember, no candy before supper.”
Before the blond could protest Sïl disappeared, and the heavy white door opened. In walked a large woman, her hands holding a plastic blue tray. 'Ilsi,” she cooed softly, not at all perturbed by the boy sitting on the floor, staring blankly a head, “it's squash and carrots, mashed, with some chicken, your favourite.” She knelt down gingerly, her blue eyes unworried by the lack of response, “don't you want supper? There's candy after.”
This elicited a response, carefully, he turned his head, “okay.” He said softly, excepting the tray. He ate quietly, ignoring the woman's scrutiny as he did so. Once he was done, he placed the tray on the linoleum, and silently extended his hand. Smiling sadly, the brunette nurse handed him a small paper cup.
Inside was a myriad of colourful pills. Smiling slightly the boy peered in, “pretty,” he surmised then, without any hesitation the blond boy swallowed each one whole. He put the empty paper cup on his tray without a word, and resumed his staring.
With that over, the nurse stood up with the tray and walked out of the room, but not before ruffling his shaggy mop of hair. Behind her, the door's heavy lock clicked soundly into place. As she went down the white hall, another person joined her, “Cynthia,” the man was short, seemingly tiny compared to the nurse's large, curvacious frame, “how is our youngest patient?”
Cynthia grimaced slightly, “he wasn't violent, though I saw him talking to this 'Seyel', again. Are his parents here to complain once more?” She demanded, tone weary.
The small man sighed, taking off precariously perched glasses to rub a hand down his face, “the father is complaining that all this is postponing his trip to the mainland,” replacing his glasses he sneered slightly at the thought.
“And the mother?” The brunette prompted.
“She seems genuinely worried, but I don't think she really grasps the fact that whatever is wrong with her son can not be magically cured away,” the two medical professionals shook their heads sadly at the thought.
“Well,” Cynthia said slowly her large eyes darting away from her companion to look at the stainless steel metal doors at the end of the hall, “at least she cares.” As the two reached the doors, they paused, the brunette glancing back at room 143. “Dr. Lawrence, what do you think is wrong with him?” The nurse asked hesitantly, her tan face creased with worry.
The doctor sighed, “I don't really know, I honestly don't.” With that, he walked past the doors into a large waiting room. Cynthia followed suit, walking past the families and going through another set of doors. As she did so she heard the doctor say to a nervous looking red headed woman, “no Mrs. Gott, he can't come home yet.” Cynthia Jones winced, personally, she didn't think Ilsi Gott would ever go home; he was just too broken.
“What are you doing?” The voice that asked this question was soft and young and held a rasping quality.
“Playing,” came the equally soft and young answer, though the voice was smoother, “want to play too?” The speaker looked up as he asked, brown eyes peeking up from behind pale bangs.
“No,” the reply was monotone, the blue eyes bored, and the pale face expressionless.
“Please,” the blond whined, lower lip jutting out, his hands reaching out to grasp his counterparts' wrist. “Just one game?” He asked, wheedling as he tugged on the boy's arm, trying to get him to sit.
“No Ilsi, I will not play with you,” the reply this time was more emphatic, but not cross. The blond wrinkled his nose, face upturned to look at the darker boy. His games forgotten, he quickly pulled himself into a kneeling position, his hands falling onto his knees. Seeing Ilsi's pleading expression, the other boy sighed, and dropped down, mirroring his position. “I'm not going to play with you,” he insisted, “but don't make faces they'll stick like that.”
Immediately Ilsi's upset visage smoothed out, leaving a blank, hollow look in it's place, trying to imitate his friend. They sat in silence for several moments, mirror images, and yet not. One boy was dark while the other was light. One boy exuded a cold dispassion, while the other radiated joy and childishness. They couldn't have been less alike. “Are you sure?” Ilsi asked finally, face splitting into a hopeful, docile grin.
Despite this, the boy's resolve didn't waver, “yep, I'm sure.”
Pouting once again, the blond huffed, “you're no fun Sïl, no fun at all.”
Sïl laughed softly, “I'm not suppose to be fun, remember?”
Ilsi shook his head, “remember what?” he demanded, brown eyes narrowed.
A sigh, “nothing Il', nothing at all,” Sïl looked up at the door, “I gotta go, okay, I'll see you tomorrow. And remember, no candy before supper.”
Before the blond could protest Sïl disappeared, and the heavy white door opened. In walked a large woman, her hands holding a plastic blue tray. 'Ilsi,” she cooed softly, not at all perturbed by the boy sitting on the floor, staring blankly a head, “it's squash and carrots, mashed, with some chicken, your favourite.” She knelt down gingerly, her blue eyes unworried by the lack of response, “don't you want supper? There's candy after.”
This elicited a response, carefully, he turned his head, “okay.” He said softly, excepting the tray. He ate quietly, ignoring the woman's scrutiny as he did so. Once he was done, he placed the tray on the linoleum, and silently extended his hand. Smiling sadly, the brunette nurse handed him a small paper cup.
Inside was a myriad of colourful pills. Smiling slightly the boy peered in, “pretty,” he surmised then, without any hesitation the blond boy swallowed each one whole. He put the empty paper cup on his tray without a word, and resumed his staring.
With that over, the nurse stood up with the tray and walked out of the room, but not before ruffling his shaggy mop of hair. Behind her, the door's heavy lock clicked soundly into place. As she went down the white hall, another person joined her, “Cynthia,” the man was short, seemingly tiny compared to the nurse's large, curvacious frame, “how is our youngest patient?”
Cynthia grimaced slightly, “he wasn't violent, though I saw him talking to this 'Seyel', again. Are his parents here to complain once more?” She demanded, tone weary.
The small man sighed, taking off precariously perched glasses to rub a hand down his face, “the father is complaining that all this is postponing his trip to the mainland,” replacing his glasses he sneered slightly at the thought.
“And the mother?” The brunette prompted.
“She seems genuinely worried, but I don't think she really grasps the fact that whatever is wrong with her son can not be magically cured away,” the two medical professionals shook their heads sadly at the thought.
“Well,” Cynthia said slowly her large eyes darting away from her companion to look at the stainless steel metal doors at the end of the hall, “at least she cares.” As the two reached the doors, they paused, the brunette glancing back at room 143. “Dr. Lawrence, what do you think is wrong with him?” The nurse asked hesitantly, her tan face creased with worry.
The doctor sighed, “I don't really know, I honestly don't.” With that, he walked past the doors into a large waiting room. Cynthia followed suit, walking past the families and going through another set of doors. As she did so she heard the doctor say to a nervous looking red headed woman, “no Mrs. Gott, he can't come home yet.” Cynthia Jones winced, personally, she didn't think Ilsi Gott would ever go home; he was just too broken.
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hello everybody, its been a long time
im back with some of my awesome rhymes
but heres an update, so lets be clear
i coming strong for this new year
you see my story with the amazing cast,
twilight, sonic, and mario last
ending because of my dislike
so naruto is taking a hike
so im starting it over with a new hero instead
and this hero, the almighty triforce, he's embed
so it is link, the hero of time
but i know what your asking,"but what about the rhymes?"
yeah the rap battles are so run to do
but i need a little help from you
you decide and two characters, that shall battle for fame
you guys i can say i love as friends, i say without shame
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and you and i relive our joy every night without much thought about why we do it we share the details of our secret loves with one another rekindling the fire that sparked it all the glimmers the sparkle the glamour of that first interest leaves you and i hungry and i believe you and i are growing closer by these addictions and vices we feed at 3:15 am this dream exchange is going to crash one day because the money we stake on this dream talk is quite a big gamble and we, the poor and sensitive, are running out of free passes yes one day either we will consume our dreams or they will consume us.
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Ah, okaaay, first thing's first, how to pronounce those weird looking names.
Name 1, Ilsi Gott - is pronounced I-L-EE G-OH-T. Yes, his last name is pronounced as in the English word 'goat'
Name 2, Sïl - is pronounced S-EYE-L. Cynthia actually says it, but that's just in case anyone missed her helpful comment and/or didn't make the connection.
Please note, those names are made up except for "Gott" which is German for "God".
This little story is actually two characters (Ilsi and Sïl) from a DIFFERENT story I'm planning, plugged in a sort of real life world.
I won't go into too much detail here, but if you show interest, you will be bombarded with information. Basically, Ilsi has hallucinations about his friend Sïl, who never has existed. He's therefore in an insane asylum which I have unofficially dubbed "St. Krazie's", ironic naming is fun (on that note this world is quickly getting out of control, it's already demanded I create is a Colonel Henry L. MacPhearson and a Major Cora N. Maddox).
Sïl is actually a visual hallucination of Ilsi's other personality*. If we look at their names, Sïl, can also be spelled "S-I-I-L", which is obviously an anagram of Ilsi. Those names look so weird typed, they look sort of cool on paper though.
So...comment if want, constructive criticism will be appreciated, and feel free to POINT OUT ANY TYPOS AND SPELLING/GRAMMAR ERRORS.
*please note that the author is aware that visual hallucination are not usually associated with DID, and she is also aware that DID usually manifests because of some other mental issue or trauma. In fact Ilsi has PTSD but I didn't bother putting that in there.
Sorry 'bout the super long comment here, I'll stop now.
All characters and settings mentioned in this story are the property of me, don't steal them please, they are my babies.
Name 1, Ilsi Gott - is pronounced I-L-EE G-OH-T. Yes, his last name is pronounced as in the English word 'goat'
Name 2, Sïl - is pronounced S-EYE-L. Cynthia actually says it, but that's just in case anyone missed her helpful comment and/or didn't make the connection.
Please note, those names are made up except for "Gott" which is German for "God".
This little story is actually two characters (Ilsi and Sïl) from a DIFFERENT story I'm planning, plugged in a sort of real life world.
I won't go into too much detail here, but if you show interest, you will be bombarded with information. Basically, Ilsi has hallucinations about his friend Sïl, who never has existed. He's therefore in an insane asylum which I have unofficially dubbed "St. Krazie's", ironic naming is fun (on that note this world is quickly getting out of control, it's already demanded I create is a Colonel Henry L. MacPhearson and a Major Cora N. Maddox).
Sïl is actually a visual hallucination of Ilsi's other personality*. If we look at their names, Sïl, can also be spelled "S-I-I-L", which is obviously an anagram of Ilsi. Those names look so weird typed, they look sort of cool on paper though.
So...comment if want, constructive criticism will be appreciated, and feel free to POINT OUT ANY TYPOS AND SPELLING/GRAMMAR ERRORS.
*please note that the author is aware that visual hallucination are not usually associated with DID, and she is also aware that DID usually manifests because of some other mental issue or trauma. In fact Ilsi has PTSD but I didn't bother putting that in there.
Sorry 'bout the super long comment here, I'll stop now.
All characters and settings mentioned in this story are the property of me, don't steal them please, they are my babies.
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WEDGE! Sorry for being so DA-neglectful. I'm a bad internet friend...
I have to say, the first line in all its italicized splendor has completely stolen my heart, it sounds prophetic and symbolic and worrying in the way that can spark off some great adventure, it made me so excited to read the rest. But.
Butbutbut there's an unnecessary apostrophe in the 'its'. D: I'M SORRY. But you did ask.
"...are you sure?" Aww, poor Ilsi's adorable...
I have to say, the first line in all its italicized splendor has completely stolen my heart, it sounds prophetic and symbolic and worrying in the way that can spark off some great adventure, it made me so excited to read the rest. But.
Butbutbut there's an unnecessary apostrophe in the 'its'. D: I'M SORRY. But you did ask.
"...are you sure?" Aww, poor Ilsi's adorable...